James
Richardson, Interglacial: New and Selected Poems & Aphorisms
(Ausable
Press, 2004),
pbk, 280pp., $11.00.
It is easy to see why some would call James Richardson
a “nature poet”; not only do his poems, and
especially his early ones, draw on fairly common images and
the phenomena of the physical world, he also shows a likeably
human relationship to his environment, the kind we tend to
imagine Wordsworth had—this work is feeling and respectful,
written very much from open-minded observation and experience. However, it is also easy to see why Richardson writes, in
“Afterword” (a prose piece included in this Selected),
that “nature poet” is “a term I detest.” The moniker does
smack of tenderheartedness, a blowsy descriptiveness that prefers
atmosphere to rigorous analysis, and even a flaky sort of
mysticism. For Richardson is not tenderhearted (he is sometimes
unforgiving) or romantically atmospheric (his playfulness is
exact, almost academic)—nor, most importantly, does he have the
sureness of a visionary. His is neither a self-absorbed nor
a unifying vision: he doesn’t use what he sees to make
something of himself, and he doesn’t let his self melt entire
into what it is he sees. Instead, he stands in weird and
admirable balance with the world, trying to understand, as he
writes in the poem that opens this Selected, how, in the
image of a flock of starlings landing all together, “something
senseless, even selfish, absurdly magnified / becomes grandeur….”
Even so, these are nature poems—at
least in so far as they ground, often with a great deal of
visual and musical brio, the poet’s epistemological speculations
in the here-and-now.
Formally and imagistically, these poems are often beautiful, but
they are not virtuostic artifacts, written after the fact.
Tracing the process of a mind trying to make sense of what it
sees, or has seen, they are natural in technique as well as in
image. In this way, Richardson is a formalist who doesn’t quite
read like one. His voice, steady, considered, truthful and
attentive, seems as wary of shapeless extravagance as it does of
the circumscriptions of an overadherence to design.
And this attraction to and wariness with
design seems to be his main concern: design’s reach, its various
correspondences, as well as our ability to know it and understand
it. He articulates the slipperiest of thoughts with an amazing
precision of analogy: “…oh you you / who are a galaxy that
has never heard of you, / as words have never heard of a
beautiful line / or the beautiful line of its explanation” (“How
Things Are”), the same precision he uses to try to “read” the
mysterious observable facts around him, as in the echoey closing
segment of “For the Birds” (a poem on bird’s birdsongs) “Is this the end the end / one says / one
says / no this is this is.” It must be said, though,
that some of these early poems, written for the most part in the
gentlest of the lyrical present tense, are so unencumbered, so
undisrupted by the jingle-jangle of a life outside of the
sense-making mind that they feel almost determinedly modest,
sealed. The shorter lined poems, then, often work better to my
ear—the prickliness of their rhythms roughs up the lack of
emphasis one sometimes finds in the longer-lined poems (a
phenomenon that his newest work with aphorisms
tackles in provocative and successful ways). One of the
most immediately appealing of these early poems,
“Post-Romantic,” puts his idiomatic tendencies to work with a
more smiling wryness than he shows elsewhere, no less intent on
their study of grey area than the others, but tonally,
linguistically, emotionally, more popped into focus. Beginning
“Now that it’s over / between me and Nature / I like her
better,” its second stanza (of three) reads:
Just hanging on, but trim,
surprising, capable,
she shows, towards evening,
some of the old flashes.
If her solitudes,
amazed and kind,
can’t be mine,
or her gaze of waters
stirs others,
no harm done.
She’s on her own.
Here, Richardson does not overwork the poem’s conceit; its
middle aged melancholy, its learnedness, its gentle off-rhymes—even the joke of its title—has a
lightness of touch that another poet might mangle with the
application of too much effort or too much heat.
Moreover, it is, in a poem like this, the
personality of the poet’s thought that comes through, not the
personality of the poet himself. Much of the contemporary poetry
that specializes in the ambiguous feels like coded confession,
its metaphysics just a fancy way of working out personal—and
often, for the reader, inscrutable—obsessions: what is at stake
in such work can be irritatingly, and pretentiously, kept just
out of reach. Not so for Richardson, whose attentiveness towards
his subject is sincere. His work reminds us that there is a
virtue in old fashioned self-effacement—or at least in the
attempt at it. Richardson’s poetry is metaphysics administered
carefully and knowingly; it does not degenerate into endless
mirror-play pretending at profundity, or into flourishy
effervescence.
One could argue, of course, that
Richardson’s sense of slight remove, along with his formal
nuancing, bespeaks a certain privilege, a kind of noblesse
oblige that can afford to be quiet, unobtrusive, even
“traditional,” in the face of what it observes. However, there
is also a strange hint of dissatisfaction in most of
Richardson’s work, and it is to the advantage of his poetry’s
tonal subtlety that these moments neither take over nor are
smoothed completely away—nor can be entirely pinned down. His
early work is pleasing, but not always as pointed as it could
be—yet there is something admirably truthful about the way he
balances the natural echoes, pauses and parentheticals of his
thinking with little flashes of pithy wisdom. His ideas, though
gentle in demeanor, feel genuinely hard won.
To my mind, though, Richardson’s most
exciting work is his most recent. His newest poems and his work
from Vectors (2001), both of which constitute the last
half of this Selected, are partly made up of what he
calls “aphorisms and ten second essays,” single-line and often
one-sentence poems with a risky (and sometimes deceptive) air of
generalization. These poems are simultaneously looser and more
distilled than the early work, which on occasion risks fading into
the shadows of its own thoughtfulness. With this new form, he
pushes himself out of the old habits of the meditative
follow-through, and isolates the very ambiguity at the heart of
his desire to make a sensible (in both senses of the word)
observation.
Of the aphorisms (there are more than 500
here) all are thought-provoking in their articulation of the
subtlest difference—“Despair says I cannot lift that weight.
Happiness says I do not have to”—but the best are
unforgiving, even a little scary, despite their sure and placid
surface: “Your lie is white only if you’re sure you won’t come
to believe it.” The plainness of their packaging belies the
unplumbed loneliness they often describe: “I only like being the
center of the universe when no one else is there.” Tonally, they
seem prosy, but their use of figurative language gives them a
resonance that is neither paraphrasable nor entirely soluble: “The
chorus fills what the soloist has emptied.” Like Frost’s most
famous lines, quotable and ripe for misinterpretation,
Richardson’s have an air of serviceability, though the actual
service their wisdom provides is sometimes knotty, paradoxical,
ambiguous: “The lonelier the road, the more creatures you
startle.” “The despair of the blank page: it is so full.” At
first glance, these seem recognizably simple and true; reread,
they gain mystery and echoes. Here, Richardson’s natural lack of
inflection is put to what could be its best use; combined with
an extreme brevity, it gives these declarations a weird
authority, an air of quiet testiness.
These poems, then, are an experiment with
durability and resonance. They do not sting like La
Rouchfoucauld’s clunky and cynical maxims; nor are they willowy
art objects, built to be admired. They are wise, worthwhile. But
they also call into question the precise function that “general
truth” has in poetry, caught as it necessarily is in specific,
figural, and ever-shifting time. Richardson’s work, even if
boiled down to something that looks like a quip, still maintains
the thinking mind’s essential ambivalence, and this, I would
argue, is what most gives these tiny poems their affecting and
provocative quality. Richardson’s formalism is far more
thoughtful than most of that in contemporary poetry, where it
often manifests as something more concerned with formatting, or
slavish and almost unintentionally ironical. But this is a
formalism which never falls into glibness or virtuosity, and is highly
attuned to the dangers of self-satisfied declaiming. The best of
his work opens up an idea rather than shutting it down: “Greater
than the temptations of beauty are those of method,” he writes,
beautifully if not methodically. Here is a poet who seems to
know these temptations, both those of nature and those of art,
intimately, but who will not allow either to overpower the
sense-making impulse of his remarkable mind.
— Lizzie Hutton
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